Mur suggested that I should print it out and read it and make notes on changes. Note this is not editing for spelling and grammar. Just notes on things you should add and or remove. I am going to go somewhere tomorrow and read it all afternoon. Hopefully it should help me get back into the story so I can continue. I may also try outlining which was another of her suggestions.
Speaking of Mur,** she has released the first chapter of the last book in her Heaven series. It is called War . You should go listen to it. If you have not listened to the rest of the series you should do that first. What is it about? The series is about the two friends who die and make it to heaven. That is just the beginning of the story. Only the thing is, they find they can't be satisfied with eternal happiness. They go from travelers through the various after lives, to being the harbingers of doom. And that is just the beginning. I really liked this series and I recommend it to everyone.
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*of course I care. I am not stupid. It is just not as important.
**Did you see that transition there? I should so be in media.